Flicking through the feedback sheets, i made notes on the areas i need to improve and change on in each format. I then began making these changes and improvements.I improved on this first poster by changing the typography wording so that the date is shown first in a short simple way. I also shifted the album title 'Uncovered' lower down so that it is more legible and bold.
On this second poster I made changes by starting off with editing the image. I cloned the hair of our artist on the right hand side to make it look more thick and fuller; filling the gap. I then made the image of Isabel Beau bigger so that it covers majority of the page and made it be positioned more central and higher up; this is so that the audiences complete attention is on her rather then the type. I moved the small image of the album cover and the information to the left side so that it doesn't take over all the image. By adding the date on i made it clear to the audience of the release date of the album by positioning it under the album.
I think both these posters work really well as they are consistent to the digipak. They both look professional and genuine however, I feel that the first poster looks much better as it look more consistent due to the same background and much more interesting. The way I have blended the paint background over the image and behind it makes it look captivating and beautiful.
The feedback i got on my digipak was that it's just right and perfect with expressing our artist personality and genre of music. This is of expressing Isabel Beau's personality being sweet innocent and girly as well as having an edgy seductive side but the album being about her life and personal and the situations she has been through. The lyrics book(fourth panel) and the way 'Isabel Beau' is written contributes to the album being personal and making it connect to the audiences. All the images work well together and link. Having the two Cd's, one being a bonus cd, makes this album catchy to the target audience as it is a unique selling point. The background and cd images work along with the images due to the pop girly style. I really like this final digipak that I have produced and it looks really professional and genuine.
