Change in Narrative

From one of the feedbacks on our pitch we got was that the narrative was a bit difficult to understand in that of the young girl growing up throughout the video and how it will relate to the family problems. My group and i had a discussion on whether to still continue with this idea or not. We came upon a decision of changing our narrative slightly so that it is a bit more simple and easier to understand. The narrative will now be of a young girl doing ballet dancing as an escapism from her home where here parent are constantly arguing and fighting.The narrative will convey the message of the girl dancing to keep her away from family problems and will also express her feeling and emotions of feeling lonely and fed up of her parents always arguing. 

When it comes to editing the music video, we will experiment with having all the narrative in black and white and the scenes showing Isabel Beau in colour. The whole black and white concept will be used to show the difference between the narrative and the artist singing so that the audience don't get confused. By having the narrative in black and white will connote the idea of the storyline being emotional, serious and upsetting.